This post first published June 16, 2011.
Author: Christopher Paolini
Published: 2002
Publisher: Laurel Leaf
Series: Inheritance #1
730 pages (mass market paperback)
I remember eight or nine years ago, seeing this book everywhere
in bookshops and there was the movie and everything too. I didn’t get
around to reading it then, but I picked it up now because I know someone
who likes this series so when I saw it, by chance, at the library, I
decided to take it out.
An elf named Arya is trying to smuggle a dragon’s egg to a safe
location, away from the evil Empire. When it seems they are about to
catch her, she uses magic to make the egg appear leagues away, in front
of a boy named Eragon, who thinks he’s found a polished blue stone.
Eragon is a realtively normal fifteen year old kid, living on a farm,
but his life is turned upside down when he realizes the Empire is trying
to find this mysterious stone (that he later realizes is a dragon’s
egg). After the Empire burns down his farm, killing his uncle in the
process, Eragon flees while vowing to get revenge. He is found by an old
storyteller named Brom, who turns out not to be who he is — he is
actually part of an ancient order of Riders, men who had dragons and
rode the skies protecting the land. With Brom on his side, Eragon
journeys to where he believes the killers are, while being taught
swordplay and magic.
There’s more, but if you haven’t noticed by now, you just read the basic plot of Star Wars: Episode IV. The rest of the book is also quite similar to the ending of Star Wars,
but since I didn’t want to give away “spoilers”, I didn’t continue
describing the plot (which is, I know, silly, if you already know the
plot of Star Wars).
Eragon is written by then-teenager Christopher Paolini, and
all I can say is that it really shows. I couldn’t stand the writing and
I’m certain there was some thesaurus abuse. He over-describes everything,
every room, every piece of clothing, every action. This also applies to
the general story: every little action was described. He doesn’t take
advantage of the fact that words can make the passing of time go much
faster or slower — you’re just stuck with Eragon the whole time in everything
he does. An entire chapter is devoted to describing an eventless trip
through the desert, which I think could have been summed up in a
paragraph, if not a sentence or two. I remember there was a scene where
Eragon is talking to someone, mentions he’s feeling a little grimy from
all his traveling, so he goes takes a bath, and comes back to resume the
conversation. I mean, really? Did you have to insert a bath scene right then? It didn’t add anything to the story at all. It was utterly pointless.
The characters were rather boring. Eragon started out bland and one
dimensional, and as the story continued, I actually started disliking
him. Other characters scraped by with maybe two character
traits. For the majority of the book, the characters were very evenly
split into good guys versus bad guys, with no gray area. Such black and
white characters. There was a little bit of an attempt to give Durza,
one of the main villains, a sympathizing back story near the very end of
the novel, but it was done rather clumsily and hastily, so it didn’t
really work. As for the races, they were incredibly cliche: elegant,
beautiful and wise elves; short, strong, hardy dwarves; young, ambitious
humans. Yeah.
Move along, nothing new here.
I’ve no doubt that the author put lots of time and effort into this
book, as all authors do, and I don’t think the similarities to Star Wars are intentional, but I can’t help but wonder how this book became as popular as it did. My overall experience with Eragon
was cringe-worthy. I spent the last 200-ish pages wondering why this
story just won’t end. I definitely have no interest in continuing this
series.
My Rating: 1/5
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